The World Is Bigger Than You Think
Living in Southern California with a wife and two
kids, we availed ourselves several times of annual
passes to Disneyland. At the time, an annual pass cost
about the same as two park visits, but Disney made their
money by selling us stuff — mostly food — each time we
went. And, determined to get our money's worth out of
the passes, we went often.
I cherish the memories. I close my eyes and see my
family riding Space Mountain, Big Thunder Mountain
Railroad, and the "Matterhorn bobsleds." We ride through
the Haunted Mansion, visit the Country Bear Jamboree,
and take the Skyway to Tomorrowland where we are moved
by the People Mover, and later by the short-lived Rocket
Rods. We watched Captain Eo in a test screening a few
weeks before it actually opened. We loved the old
version of Mr. Lincoln and the old "American Journeys"
in Circle Vision 360. Then there's the park itself and
its idyllic reflections of the world — Main Street, New
Orleans Square, Frontierland, and Adventureland. I
enjoyed Disneyland as much as my kids — mostly because
of them.
But one "attraction" is different. I rode it the
first time I went to the park and never, ever again —
"It's A Small World After All." On his "Wonderful World
of Color" broadcasts in the mid-sixties, Walt Disney
made it sound fabulous. In reality, it is a thing
without end that should instead be without beginning.
The ride communicates a lovely message of world peace,
then communicates it again and again and again, on and
on, etc., etc. There are only so many multi cultural
animatronic children singing that sugary little diddee
of a song that you can take on one boat ride.
Looking back on recent work, I wonder if I was
rebelling against that song, that ride and its cutesy
little faux children. . . .
Stone Mansion I finally finished
a novel I've been working on in fits and starts for
years. Not wanting to personally pitch the novel to
publishers, I decided to pitch it to an agent instead.
The first one I approached (maybe he'll say "yes" and
also be the last) placed on his website a list of things
he said would enhance a fiction submission. Answering
his questions gave me interesting insight into my own
work and motivation.
"Create a Promo Sentence and a Sales Handle — these
are the bits you see on the front cover of a novel or as
a headline across the back cover."
For a promo sentence, I wrote: The world is
bigger than you think. Sales handle: A teenager
and his dad living in the middle of nowhere find
themselves at the center of everything.
Before submitting the package to the agent (did I
mention you should pray for him?) I emailed his
questions and my answers to a group of trusted friends,
asking for frank evaluations.
The living person I have spent more time writing with
than anyone else, someone whose opinion I trust like my
own, did not like, The world is bigger than you
think. Knowing the novel contains suspenseful,
creepy scenes, as well as lots of action-adventure, he
felt the promo line sounded too bright. He wrote, "This
gives me a sense that this young man is about to go out
into the world and discover wonderful things that he's
never dreamt of."
He made a good point. Cover art could place the words
in a darker context, but I wasn't writing for the book's
actual cover. I was writing for an audience of one, and
the agent would see the words without cover art.
I wound up keeping the line. It does not convey the
sense of dark, brooding danger sometimes present in the
novel, but, to me, it conveys the novel's essence.
My friend wondered how such a statement could be
true, saying, "This depends on how big you think the
world is."
Obviously, I can't know a particular reader's
conception of the world's size. But I can know it is
bigger than he thinks. Human minds cannot fathom the
greatness of God, nor the love He has chosen to invest
in us. By placing us here, God made the world great.
From the words "For God so loved the world," we can
infer many things, including — The world is bigger
than you think.
The world is full of human beings, and we cannot
fathom the significance of a single human life, or a
single instant in that life, even our own. If sin is a
choice, and sin is enough to justly send someone to an
eternal hell, then every decision is of immense
importance. Since we can't fathom infinity, we can't
fathom the enormity of even seemingly
small parts of our lives. And since all have
sinned, our redemption is also far, far bigger than we
can possibly grasp.
The alternative is to say that the things we do, say,
feel, experience, enjoy, hate and love have no real
significance.
Either we're something or nothing. There is no
in-between.
The World is Bigger Than You Think — Part
2
If things work according to plan, Lindsey
Lohan, Britney Spears, Paris Hilton, and others will
help show the practical application of all this in Part 2. (That's quite a star-studded program. Too
bad they know nothing about it.)
In the meantime, look at Forgotten
Corner of the Universe and Forgotten
Corner of YouTube,for more discussion of this vital
topic.
Posted: 12-12-2008
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